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#1 NotANewb

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Posted 21 January 2016 - 01:35 AM

Hello, thieves!

What are Unique gems? Why are they here?

Playerxsd, NotANewb, Sotherogue, Garmertron7500, and Oliver666666 thought to make a contest about the story behind the unique gem.

Like it said in the first UG update, they came from the gods, but really, that doesn't explain much. This contest will test your imagination, as well as your knowledge of the Unique gems. You must write a story about 1 of the 3 unique gems. Include these things in your story:

Include why the gods decided to send them to the world, and how the certain Unique Gem gets its power.

The story can only be about 1 UG, and you can make 1 entry per UG which makes a total of 3 entries. There should be only 1 entry for each type of UG per person, making 3 entries per person total.

It doesn't have to be in proper paragraph form, and must have good enough English for the Watchers to understand. Grammar and punctuation errors are OK, it will just distract from the quality of your entry.

The Contest starts now and ends on Februaury 15th!

Good Luck!
NotANewb, Playerxsd, Sotherogue, Gamertron7500, and Oliver666666

 

 

UPDATE:
This contest is now official.  Each unique gem will have one winning story selected for a prize of 500 orbs.  If you have 3 stories, one for each gem, and win all 3, you could win 1500 orbs.  Each story must fit in a single post - no spanning multiple posts.  Watchers will judge so all forum members including those who came up with the idea for this contest may compete.  Good luck!

 

UPDATE 2:

The winners have been decided!

 

For his feather gem story: Plunderfoot

For his tinkling gem story: Gamertron

For his snow globe gem story: Nextphase

 

Congratz to all winners!


Edited by NotANewb, 21 February 2016 - 01:25 AM.
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Posted 21 January 2016 - 01:41 AM

I'll post my epic story as soon as this is official :)
A UG is a Unique Gem.

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Posted 21 January 2016 - 02:10 AM

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Posted 21 January 2016 - 07:45 AM

Can i make ONE story containing them ALL three? It mentioned 1 of 3, but can i make a story involving all three but are not seperate stories? And if i do, will it count as 3 entries even though it's only one story containing all 3?


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Posted 21 January 2016 - 09:00 AM

Sorry, if you do not follow the rules, you will start a little behind everyone else in the judging,
(All you have to do is write the same story 3 times with different Unique Gems;))
To answer your second question, it will count as 1 entry (even though it doesn't follow the rules;))

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Posted 22 January 2016 - 09:42 AM

NOTES:

All 3 stories are connected, so it has continuity, BUT they are still different from each other, so i can count this as another entry.

 

Today in...

THE LEGEND OF THE UNIQUE GEMS: THE FEATHER GEM

 

We'll get to know how the very first unique gem, the feather gem, was born.

 

It all started in the Heavens of the God Thieves, Invinsius was preparing for the new set of thieves ready to pass his league, Orbeseus is generating more orbs to give to the all-mighty, powerful, and mysterious creator of everything in the land of thieves, he, or rather "they" were named "Zepto", who is the highest among everyone in the thievery system. Totemius is creating more totems for new dungeons. So in short, as usual, gods are doing their godly duties. 

 

One day, Roopa, the Emerald Champion, had come upon the heavens to give his best friend, Totemius, a visit. At that time Totemius was just finishing up a ritual involving a semi-perfect gem worth 2,999,997. When the ritual had finished, Totemius got his gem to be kept in his gem storage. Roopa saw Totemius and talked to him about how annoying his thieves in his league were. After some time of talking, Roopa went back to his world, but due to his clumsiness, he didn't see a golden skull in the clouds, so he stepped on this, causing him to slip and his potions being spilled across the clouds.

 

Some of the potions hit Totemius' gem storage partially, Totemius was furious, as he rushed to check his precious gems. But what stumped him is as he opened the storage, he saw a strange glow into his gem, and it was a hollow orb-shaped gem. It didn't contain anything, it was just a hollow orb-shaped gem which was glowing. Totemius decided to talk to the almighty Zepto about this. The almighty Zepto just told the gods to experiment with this new, unique creation. So they did, they got more potions from Roopa, and every possible substance to make this new gem better. But nothing was effective to grant this gem a special ability, clearly it was something else.

 

The next day, The legendary gods of the undead heard of the news, and decided to go to the heavens to check out this legendary gem. Missy was the first to reach the heavens because of his pet, Rufus, and his quick speed. But Rufus was too quick, and had achieved extreme acceleration into the heavens, where he had crashed into where the new gem was sealed in, the gods heard of the crash and went to the pillar of the gem immediately, they were surprised to see one of Rufus' feathers to be inside the hollow gem, being engulfed in flames, since it was impossible for them to insert anything inside. They had showed this to the almighty Zepto and "they" told the gods to try and use this new, feather gem, into the totem. After 12 hours, the ritual had finished, and they were surprised to see the totem generate 15 orbs, which had been the first in the history of the totem since it only merges gems.

 

The almighty Zepto was stumped, but also impressed, numerous accidents had created something new out of the thousands of years of thievery. They commanded the gods to send this to the world of thieves. So they did, but there was a catch; it's power was too powerful to be on the hands of every thief, so what the smart Zepto thought was to create something new in the world of thieves: weekly challenges. This way Zepto will see which thief is worthy of obtaining the great feather gem. With experiments and determination, the gods had used their powers to repeatedly duplicate this gem to be stocked and kept by the almighty Zepto.

 

And, this is how the very first unique gem, the feather gem, had been (accidentally) created. 

 

Tune in for the next episode, where the legend of the bell gem will be revealed.

 

CREATOR'S NOTES FOR THIS EPISODE:

-I thought adding Zepto was good, and it was.

 

 

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Aaaaand we're back! Now the legend of the bell gem will be revealed.

THE LEGEND OF THE UNIQUE GEMS: THE BELL GEM

 

It all starts deep into the ghost world, where the old legendary kings reside. Emperor Lurk is still making attempts to bypass the rivalry kings (the legendary kings always make sure Lurk doesn't get out of the ghost world, while they still can get back to the land of thieves). And since he has heard of the news that a new unique gem was born, he was more determined to get his hands on this.

 

One day, the legendary kings went to the heavens to watch the final 30 minutes of the King of Kings League, to see who's going to be the next king of kings. But Roopa had forgotten to close the portal into the land of thieves. Lurk took this opportunity and escaped the ghost world, going to the heavens, to get his hands on this new gem. On his way to the heavens, Geffi saw him and immediately went to the heavens and warn the legendary kings about this. When Lurk got to the heavens, the old kings, along with the god thieves, were there, ready to imprison him again back to the ghost world. But Lurk had other plans, he brought potions, and not just ordinary potions. These were unstable potions, from Roopa's hall of ancient potions. He threw this to the gods and the old kings, while running to get the feather gem.

 

When he got the feather gem, Lady Painsworth immediately threw her saw-staff into Lurk as a last resort. Auric immediately summoned a wall made of gold, and Roopa was ready to face Lurk with potions. It was Roopa vs. Lurk, but immediately, Invinsius remembered he had the key to Lurk's lock, which was the "key" to his defeat. The gods immediately went to search for the key.

 

Meanwhile, the fight went on until both only had 1 potion left. This is when the gods found the key, Missy's pet, Rufus, smashed and threw Lurk directly to Totemius, who has holding the key, so they opened the chest, and the chest ultimately revealed a mysterious tinkling bell, Lurk was nowhere to be found, and presumably was sent back to the ghost world as an actual ghost now. 

 

While celebrating the victory that Lurk is finally imprisoned into the ghost world permanently, they completely forgot about the feather gem in which Lurk had his hands on. Auric found the fallen feather gem, with a cracked globe, and was covered in potions from the fight. They put the cracked feather gem, and the mysterious tinkling bell, to the pillar of valuables. The next day, the gods were stumped to see the tinkling bell merged with the former feather gem, and the cracks were also mysteriously fixed. They reported this to the almighty Zepto, Zepto said to send this new unique gem to the land of thieves, but Orbeseus was in doubt, he told the almighty Zepto that it might be unstable, or can cause weird reactions to the totem since it came from a dangerous king, and was covered in highly unstable and ancient potions. Zepto didn't mind this at all, saying that they can always do their magic repairing ritual, which they called "bug fixing."

 

Meanwhile, in Geffi's dungeon, Geffi was holding 3 globes, one was the feather gem, the other was the new bell gem, and the third was something unknown and mysterious. Geffi then smiles, then continues rubbing the third unknown gem happily while keeping the other 2.

 

Tune in for the next episode, where the origins of the third unique gem Geffi was holding will be revealed. 

 

CREATOR'S NOTES:

-The end is foreshadowing something, find out in episode 3.

-Or can you guess what Geffi is hiding?

 

 

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The final legend will be now revealed.

 

THE LEGEND OF THE UNIQUE GEMS: THE SNOW GLOBE GEM

 

It all starts in a certain part of the land of thieves, the Grasslands. It's Christmas and grasslands is covered in snow. The god thieves decided to go down to grasslands to visit for the holidays, taking a break from their jobs. Totemius invited Zepto over to come with them, but Lord Zepto said they were busy for a "surprise". The gods didn't mind this and went down without them.

 

In Geffi's dungeon, Geffi displayed the 3rd unknown gem, revealing a glowing pine tree inside it. Then he creates a portal, and goes in it. Back to the grasslands, The gods were wondering what the surprise was, when they saw crowds of thieves going near something covered in a red blanket, there they flew to the scene to see Zepto unveiling their surprise.

 

There, Zepto removed the blanket to reveal a machine, namely the Style-o-Thief machine, a new machine for costumes. Every thief immediately rushed to be first in line, gathering their ingredients to get their beloved costumes in the biggest surprise of the year.

 

The old kings also went to grasslands for a visit. This of course didn't include Lurk, who was a ghost trying to escape the ghost world. Before the old kings left, Lurk had one last evil plan, he took a miniature pine tree and instantly merged it with one of his spiritual crown jewels, causing the tree to glow, then he threw this behind Missy, landing on Rufus's back, with none of the kings even noticing.

 

Back to the grasslands, Totemius brought the bell and feather gem, for safekeeping. There they were invited by Zepto to roll the machine. The gods gladly agreed to this. Orbeseus dispensed 1 eye and got a unicorn costume, in which he loved. Invinsius dispensed 5 purple dust and got a lucky face, in which he liked as well. Totemius dispensed 8 eyes and got the rarest costume, the snow racer, in which he loved. Then they went to the snowy hills, to watch the thieves snowboard. Totemius was eager to try this, in which he did. He went up the highest hill, then slid down. But he went too fast, so he went flying off the hills, with both bell and feather gems falling off his hands.

 

These 2 unique gems fell near to the old kings, who were also watching the snowboarders. The bell gem shattered and the bell made a unique kind of explosion, an explosion that sent it flying to the hills, making a fireworks-like explosion, but the feather gem was nowhere to be seen, the gods and the old kings searched the hills, until Rufus, Missy's pet found the feather, and like the hungry monster he is, he ate the glowing feather, along with the broken shards. Missy was surprised to see nothing happen to Rufus, as it's dangerous to ingest mystical glowing gems. Rufus then found the cursed pine tree, which fell off his back, and ate this as well.

 

Nothing happened to Rufus, so the gods thought to just ask for another stock of both bell and feather gems from Zepto.

 

Later that afternoon, Rufus started acting weird, until he burped a gem with a pine tree on it, this was the snow globe gem, this was the birth of a gem from a monster's stomach. Missy noticed this and went to the heavens, along with the other gods, to test this new creation. After the old kings were gone, Lurk was furious, saying that it was supposed to be the instrument for switching bodies with another thief, so his plan failed miserably. 

 

In the heavens, Zepto saw this and was amazed, telling them it fits perfectly for the holidays, and was going to unveil this as a second part of Zepto's holiday surprises. But they were curious though, what would this do? There was only 1 way to find out: Start a ritual with it. So they did, they started a ritual with it.

 

11 hours and 30 minutes later, the old kinds went early to see what this new christmas-themed gem does. 30 minutes later, the ritual finished. They were disappointed to see that there were no orbs rewarded. But Orbeseus noticed something: The totem's teeth did not disappear. They were surprised, saying that a totem has never got unlimited power before, until now. There they duplicated the snow globe gem, and Zepto unveiled this as a surprise, and made the very first challenge having this as a reward. It was truly a Christmas miracle.

 

Back to Geffi's dungeon, Getti had returned, holding various new outfits never before seen in the new style-o-thief machine. That was because he can see and travel to the future, along with getting things from the future and going with them in the present. This was why he got the snow globe gem before it was created. Geffi also had merged the bell and the cracked feather gem without anyone knowing. Geffi knows what the future of thieves will hold, and keeps this a secret. For now he has held the new outfits. What could the future have in store for thieves? Only Geffi knows. 

 

And this is the legends of the unique gems. Could there be a 4th unique gem now? Only Geffi knows, and he's not telling anyone. This has been a legends reveal marathon, thank you and good day!

 

CREATOR'S NOTES:

-Did you see the ending coming?

-The new outfits are an allusion to Zepto revealing there will be new outfits in the 2.8 update.

-ONLY GEFFI KNOWS


Edited by Gian, 24 January 2016 - 10:02 AM.

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Posted 22 January 2016 - 10:12 AM

Holy, i cant compete with this XD. Nice story!

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Posted 22 January 2016 - 11:00 AM

This is my first story about the unique gem even if there aren't any rewards i decided to try and make an story:
In the first weeks nothing much happened invinius was working on having very powerfull stealers that always steal gems and they stay in to p always orbseud was powerfull and the god was feeling very powerfull the league was always in competition,totemnius was handling the orbs rewards and always having very powerfull thiefs in the league.
the unique gem was created by the gods,the gods were amazed of the excitement the thiefs had and the war they were in and they were liking their encouragement and excitement in league,so they created an first unique gem but they decided that the unique gem needed an more cool way of creating it and so they first made an bird.The bird was fragile and able to get easily annoyed,after 2 days the bird was. transformed into an phoenix it was lookung more powerfull.the bird wanted to do all kinds of things as an phonix but sadly she was killed by an knight thief when she was killed one of her feathers was still on fire the gods saw that and with that feather they maked the feather gem.The unique gem was stolen by an thief and that thief made an ritual with the unique gem and after 12 hours of the rotual he got fifteen orbs.the gods were surprised that the unique gem was stolen and they decided to ask zepto to make an way to compete for the feather gem.Zepto lab decided to make challenges so that the thiefs compete for an unique gem and no one will get it very easy.The gods were pleased of their competition and that's why they created this incredible unique gem,also they were liking that the unique gem gives you rewards once you used it and since they knew that the unique gem can be stolen they decided to make an ability for the unique gem and that ability was that the unique gem was disguised in an spiky gem when used once.This is the first story about how the feather gem was created.to be continue in the next story i'll tell about an unique gem called the bell gem.

Edited by playerxsd, 22 January 2016 - 11:06 AM.

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Posted 22 January 2016 - 07:09 PM

Here is my entry for the Feather gem:

Prologue:

There once was a time, in thiefland where guilds fought with violence and the land reigned by Rastin. The leagues were the thieves only way out of the Hellhole that was normal life. There was once a guild called “Happy-Go-Lucky”, and this is the guild that started it all. This guild was known to steal massive gems all the time, and was hailed as the guild with the best teamwork. At this point in time, guilds could have upward to thousands of members, and we're almost like gangs on the cobblestone streets of the major city, Dungonis. In Dungonis is where all their guilds reside, and is known to be quite filled with crime, for some reason. There were three brothers in the guild Happy-Go-Lucky, and they were by far the best thieves in the land. The brothers names were “Geffi”, “Lurk”, and “Froszel”. Our story begins with Geffi.

The feather gem:

Geffi was the king of kings of his time. He was the best thief in the land, far more than his brothers Lurk and Froszel. After 47 long years with H-G-L guild, Geffi left for the purple mountain in the third world to seek complete zen with himself and the thiefland. Geffi was always the most clever brother, and most powerful. A strong thief by all measures, Geffi was easily able to get to the mountains, where he found a cave to seek shelter in on his first night alone. Not a moment too soon either, because the purple mountains is known for heavy thunderstorms, and striking gems into existence. When lightning hits, gems form, and this is how gems are made and found. But back to Geffi, he explored further into the cave he sought refuge in to find a cowering thief in the corner. It was clear to Geffi that this thief had nothing, and was hungry and thirsty. Calming the thief down, Geffi was able to help revitalize the man back to full health. The thief stood up thanking Geffi, when suddenly he revealed his true form, Totemius. Totemius is one of the three dragon gods, and was astounded by one thief’s kindness to another that he granted Geffi with the ability to levitate, as well as the gift of immortality. Geffi, astounded by the fortune of his becoming, decided to forever help new thieves with the tips and tricks he had learned throughout his long life. Totemius made him promise that and left with his magic. But Geffi noticed something that Totemius had dropped, A crystal sphere. Geffi didn't know if it was a gem or not, but in the moment of sheer gratitude, a crystalline form of a feather, symbolizing Peace, Love, and Gratitude. Not realizing it, The gem had disappeared from Geffi’s hand, as the great God took it, knowing what it meant for thiefland. The story of Geffi up to this point is known by every thief, as Geffi kept his promise to the great God and helped all thieves. This how the feather gem was created, but for a thief to get their hands in it? Totemius knew better than to drop it in any old mine. He divided to appoint Geffi to a weekly challenge, where only the greatest thieves could win such a beauty. Every week, Geffi creates a challenge for thieves to fulfill themselves Addams earn a unique gem. One strange property that Totemius never realized about the Unique Gem is that it gives 15 orbs in a ritual. Generations later would believe that it was the spherical nature of the gem that caused a reaction with orbs. Our next story is Emperor Lurk, and the bell gem...


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#10 Gian

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 01:57 AM

HIHIHIHI IT'S OFFCIAL NOW. Time to unleash what my creative brain has


Luck and skill equals to fortunium, which is an element that makes you very awesome in games IF IT EXISTED...

 

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 02:46 AM

I finished the second story, i added a touch of foreshadowing to make it better!


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Posted 23 January 2016 - 08:16 AM

The story behind the feather gem (aka submission #1)

Long ago, in a time where names were not remembered, only the treasures they posessed, the was a king with extreme power. This king was so powerful, that he had an almost infinite stream of donations, as a gift to keep him on his throne, so he would not steal anything for that little time while they occupied him. It was a disgusting thing, as even the poorest citizens had to bring most of their bellongings to satisfy the kings greedy needs, otherwise they knew they would lose everything they had, as they could not defend from the kings wrath. The kings greed bought upon a reign of terror and sadness to the land.

One day, one of the poorest citizens had nothing to give to the king. Still, he stood in the line empty handed to bring the bad news the the king. He knew the punishment would be terrible, and his family was in danger, so he chose to do the ultimate sacrifice, he would gift his life to the king, to let his family live. He picked up the royal dagger, and stood in the days long line. It had a blood red handle, with a white goose feather on the end of the handle, and a golden blade. In the end, he would either be ordered to die by that blade, or serve the kings guard till death, which was even worse. Still, he had many days worth of standing in line, so slowly he went to sleep.

The gods saw the feelings in this person. Desperate, but accepting. Sad, but happy. Angry, but powerless. And love for his family filled his heart. They decided to interfere with these inferial matters. When he woke up, he was surprised to find a donation worth of gold and gems by his side. Also, there was talk, that the royal blade was back at the end of the line. But how was that possible, he thought? He hadnt reached the king yet! Then he looked down at his blade. The handle of the royal blade had turned white, and the feather had become blood red. It wasnt the royal blade anymore. He instantly knew, that this meant the start of a new era...

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 08:35 AM

I hope i win this time. I am i need of orbs!


Luck and skill equals to fortunium, which is an element that makes you very awesome in games IF IT EXISTED...

 

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 09:39 AM

hey everyone here wants orbs,and everybody is trying to have an good time so may the best one win.Current status: creative and made up something to write in my mind soon 


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Posted 23 January 2016 - 12:03 PM

I'll be needing to unleash my greatest ideas for my snow globe story.


Luck and skill equals to fortunium, which is an element that makes you very awesome in games IF IT EXISTED...

 

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Posted 23 January 2016 - 03:04 PM

I thought my story was a sure win, but your guys stories are so much better :(


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Posted 24 January 2016 - 07:52 AM

The snow globe story is complete. And it's perhaps my best.


Luck and skill equals to fortunium, which is an element that makes you very awesome in games IF IT EXISTED...

 

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Posted 24 January 2016 - 08:35 AM

My 2nd entry and this story is about how the bell gem was created:
"There was once a boy the boy's name was Aydin,he had an beautifull life until the age of 10 when he was killed along with his parents by an killer hired by Buzur,Burzur is the ruler over the underworld an dark world full of monsters he kills people and gives them tasks if the people make this tasks they get back revived to life if not they remain like that and they won't be revived.Burzur let's the persons who he killed choose their tasks well the boy had many tasks in order to complete to get back to life but he was very determined to make the tasks.At first he didn't remember who he was and what proffession he had,but it all came back to him he was an skilled thief and assasin and he was using an dagger.The first task that he choosed was to get revenge on his killer.Burzur hired an killer to kill him and he gave gold to that killer to kill the boy and his family.The hired killer enjoyed to kill his family,so the boy realy wanted to get his revenge on him.He arrived in a town called Piedmont from California at night he attacked by backstabbing the hired killer the hired killer didn't expect that so it was an perfect backstab kill.Burzur was amazed and pleased of this he gave him the next task and the next task was to get the ancient bell from the monk monastery.The monk were the monks that were so powerfull that they could control time the bell was attached on an string to the key of the clock you the monk believed to control an time control clock and that key was always moving abd the bell was always making an clinging sound.After some time Aydin arrived at the monk monastery he arrived to an gate in order to get inside the monastery he had to climb the gate that had pointy spiked at the end.The boy was hungry he hasn't ate anything,he climbed the gate and it took him an half hour he scratched into the spiked pointed gate but he was just fine,he arrived to an garden in the garden there was an apple tree he took an apple and bitted it but the apple was rotten and it had an worm it,and he said "pretty much for that apple" after saying that he ate the parts that didn't have worm in it,it gave him a lot of strength he arrived inside the monstery the monastery seemed to be abandoned he found the clock but before he could take the bell a lot of monsters appeared in front of him also there were some monk robots along with them,and they attacked him.SLASH!DOUBLE SLASH!TRIPLE SLASH!BOOM,Aydin slashed and diced three monsters and he managed to steal the bell and the key and got out of there by using an monster distracting bomb.Burzur was pleased and he decide to let him live so when he got the bell he was revived back to earth.Aydin was happy that he came back to the place he once lived.He dropped accidentally the bell and the key and before he could pick up the bell,the key turned into an sphere that was holding the bell into it and it was fire on it also.The gods saw all that and they gave Aydin an dungeon as an reward the dungeon had an gravity switch and was an new dungeon design a new released one just for him Aydin used the gem he had it protected with 2 spinners and an new trap called yellow fire which is practically an fire that stay on the ground where u want to put and when the thief steps on it the fire burns him and he dies.The ritual went well for 12 hours abd Aydin got 15 orbs.The gods were very excited to hear that the bell gem gives like the feather gem 15 orbs as an reward.So they decided to end the feather gem challenges and to make an new whole set of challenges like dodge how many traps you can,or raid many players while your thief is blindfolded and you see all in black you only see one trap,and may other cool challenges".To be continued next story the snow globe story find out in next story how the snow globe gem was created.


Edited by playerxsd, 24 January 2016 - 08:53 AM.

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#19 Gian

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Posted 24 January 2016 - 09:18 AM

Didn't the rules say to put all entries in one post?


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#20 playerxsd

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Posted 24 January 2016 - 09:40 AM

no the rules are to put one entry in one post you can put more entries in one post but it will count as one and i made only two  entry in two different posts so i didn't break any rules 


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